Relay-Version: version B 2.10 5/3/83; site utzoo.UUCP Posting-Version: version B 2.10.1 6/24/83; site unc.UUCP Path: utzoo!watmath!clyde!bonnie!akgua!mcnc!unc!wfi From: wfi@unc.UUCP (William F. Ingogly) Newsgroups: net.sf-lovers Subject: Re: Metropolis and Brunner Message-ID: <292@unc.UUCP> Date: Sat, 30-Mar-85 12:44:11 EST Article-I.D.: unc.292 Posted: Sat Mar 30 12:44:11 1985 Date-Received: Mon, 1-Apr-85 03:07:05 EST References:<216@unc.UUCP> Reply-To: wfi@unc.UUCP (William F. Ingogly) Organization: CS Dept., U. of N. Carolina at Chapel Hill Lines: 48 Summary: > Yet again, it ought to be clear that the fewer qualifiers used, the > stronger the statement is. Have read Strunk and White's THE ELEMENTS > OF STYLE? It is the best book on English usage...never mind. Your appeal to Strunk and White as an authority is beside the point. A statement can also be strong to the point of absurdity. Some writers use this for comic effect (it's called hyperbole). The unskillful or inappropriate use of hyperbole is defective style, pure and simple. > Another reason is that some of us like to "peg" ourselves. As soon > as I made that statement, some alert people learned a great deal > about me. More didn't, and still more couldn't care less, but And what exactly is it that we're supposed to learn about you? I suggest you reread the statements I responded to (I've conveniently reproduced them a little later in this response). One of the qualities that separates good writing from bad writing is CLARITY. You don't have body language, voice intensity or pitch to convey information so all the meaning in a sentence must be conveyed by its content and structure. That's why we use smiley faces to indicate irony or hyperbole in our postings to the net. Asking a reader to read your mind or guess your meaning is just plain unfair. > Another possible reason is as a "Turkey Detector." That is, anyone > who doesn't see the implied In My Opinion in those statements, > and consequently Flames, is letting us know something about him. Oh, come off it. Where are the `implied In My Opinions' in the following statements: >Also who wrote THE SHEEP LOOK UP , ( an english guy ?) , the Best >SF Book of all time . >>No. The best SF book of all time is LORD OF LIGHT by Roger Zelazny. >>It is also the best English Language book written in the twentieth >>century. >>>The best English language book of the 20th century is very probably >>>Tolkien's "The Lord of the Rings". The semantic content of these statements is clear and unambiguous. There's no information about the authors' intentions, so I'm totally incapable of commenting on whatever it was that you `really' meant. If you can show me ANYTHING in these statements that qualifies the superlative `best,' please point it out to me. I'm always ready and willing to learn. -- Regards, Bill.